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Sunday, May 01, 2005

A quick quick tale 16

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She married one, loved another.
He became her husband, the other her password.
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36 comments:

  1. Pavithra SrinivasanMay 01, 2005 2:11 pm

    Oh, lovely. Password, indeed.

    Heartbreaking, that.

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  2. ChenthilMay 01, 2005 2:12 pm

    Wow, wow. It is almost an Haikku

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  3. KayMay 01, 2005 5:08 pm

    Stunner !!!!

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  4. UnknownMay 01, 2005 6:02 pm

    :) that's really short and insightful...
    is that your story??? (curious) you never answer my queries... :(

    But i can see this happen to me... :)

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  5. P BMay 01, 2005 6:11 pm

    kalakal...

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  6. RSMay 01, 2005 6:36 pm

    Have you thought about publishing insightful, delightful, thought-provoking observations like these? I would be among the first to buy the book.

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  7. AnonymousMay 01, 2005 7:14 pm

    Wow Ammani how do you do it each time. Amazing. Thank you

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  8. The DoodlerMay 01, 2005 8:14 pm

    Total stunner! Spell-bound by your eloquence.

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  9. MeMay 02, 2005 12:03 am

    wow !!

    jus wondering what triggers these quick tale series??

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  10. Ram CMay 02, 2005 12:38 am

    good one...

    but what about the practicallity of changing the passwords frequently, due to security reasons????

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  11. kaaju katliMay 02, 2005 4:27 am

    super.
    in the true spirit
    of a kk!

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  12. AnonymousMay 02, 2005 4:28 am

    la kala kala kala kala kala.....

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  13. AnonymousMay 02, 2005 4:49 am

    A life rolled within 13 words and 4 punctuations. Excellent.

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  14. AFMay 02, 2005 3:20 pm

    Excellent!.....

    AF

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  15. ShammiMay 02, 2005 6:17 pm

    A whole life bundled up in less than 15 words - wow. Cant help wishing that your stories were longer, though, or that there were hundreds of them - if only because I finish them in a second! :( Keep writing, Ammani!

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  16. AnonymousMay 02, 2005 6:44 pm

    Could give Manirathnam a run for his money or debt. Thought he was the only guy who can come up with some silly one-liners, Ammani you too can think so low

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  17. HarishMay 03, 2005 1:50 am

    Strangely enough, I didn't get it till I read the comments! :)

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  18. kaaju katliMay 03, 2005 4:29 am

    french le ennama sonne?
    :)

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  19. kaaju katliMay 03, 2005 5:47 am

    mercy bucket :-)

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  20. The Last BloggerMay 03, 2005 7:58 pm

    Touche'

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  21. Boopathy SrinivasanMay 05, 2005 11:33 am

    other one is ur kid ??

    she married one - ur hubby
    but she loved another - ur kid
    he bcame her husband - hubby
    the other her password - the kid

    am i correct ,ammani?
    did anyone guessed this ?

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  22. AnonymousMay 05, 2005 10:59 pm

    A lifetime in 2 lines.

    I have watched all your writings in silence..smiling..knowing you..

    This one is the cherry on the top.

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  23. Twin-GeminiMay 06, 2005 5:02 am

    Sooper! :-)

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  24. AnonymousMay 06, 2005 10:19 pm

    this is the first time i am visiting ur blog, man i am very much impressed with this.

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  25. Alap GhoshMay 10, 2005 2:09 pm

    Amazing ....

    All hail ....

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  26. AnonymousMay 15, 2005 7:26 am

    Wonderful!

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  27. BadriMay 16, 2005 4:37 am

    Your blogs are sureshot blockbusters

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  28. trisJune 01, 2005 3:43 pm

    Execllent. Therein lies the story.......

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  29. ArunJune 03, 2005 10:01 am

    i can't believe this..im too stunned now..this is amazing talent!!

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  30. సतीshJune 14, 2005 9:03 pm

    And then there are those that only have the password. :(

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  31. labdabJune 21, 2005 1:14 pm

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  32. Priyamvada_KJune 22, 2005 9:56 pm

    Crisp and nice...and so heartbreaking.

    Priya.

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  33. ArchanaJune 25, 2005 1:55 am

    That was simply brilliant !

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  34. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2006 8:51 am

    hey, i have read this one in tamil with he in place of she in some magazine.

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  35. SasiprabhaSeptember 30, 2006 8:44 am

    Dropping u for the first time. Superb

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  36. rt rDecember 01, 2006 6:52 pm

    I have seen the same as a kavidhai on Anandha Vikatan..
    Someone has shamelessly lifted your poem without your permission, i guess..

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