Sunday, May 01, 2005

A quick quick tale 16

Secret
She married one, loved another.
He became her husband, the other her password.

36 comments:

Pavithra Srinivasan said...

Oh, lovely. Password, indeed.

Heartbreaking, that.

Chenthil said...

Wow, wow. It is almost an Haikku

Kay said...

Stunner !!!!

Unknown said...

:) that's really short and insightful...
is that your story??? (curious) you never answer my queries... :(

But i can see this happen to me... :)

P B said...

kalakal...

RS said...

Have you thought about publishing insightful, delightful, thought-provoking observations like these? I would be among the first to buy the book.

Anonymous said...

Wow Ammani how do you do it each time. Amazing. Thank you

The Doodler said...

Total stunner! Spell-bound by your eloquence.

Me said...

wow !!

jus wondering what triggers these quick tale series??

Ram C said...

good one...

but what about the practicallity of changing the passwords frequently, due to security reasons????

kaaju katli said...

super.
in the true spirit
of a kk!

Anonymous said...

la kala kala kala kala kala.....

Anonymous said...

A life rolled within 13 words and 4 punctuations. Excellent.

AF said...

Excellent!.....

AF

Shammi said...

A whole life bundled up in less than 15 words - wow. Cant help wishing that your stories were longer, though, or that there were hundreds of them - if only because I finish them in a second! :( Keep writing, Ammani!

Anonymous said...

Could give Manirathnam a run for his money or debt. Thought he was the only guy who can come up with some silly one-liners, Ammani you too can think so low

Harish said...

Strangely enough, I didn't get it till I read the comments! :)

kaaju katli said...

french le ennama sonne?
:)

kaaju katli said...

mercy bucket :-)

The Last Blogger said...

Touche'

Boopathy Srinivasan said...

other one is ur kid ??

she married one - ur hubby
but she loved another - ur kid
he bcame her husband - hubby
the other her password - the kid

am i correct ,ammani?
did anyone guessed this ?

Anonymous said...

A lifetime in 2 lines.

I have watched all your writings in silence..smiling..knowing you..

This one is the cherry on the top.

Twin-Gemini said...

Sooper! :-)

Anonymous said...

this is the first time i am visiting ur blog, man i am very much impressed with this.

Alap Ghosh said...

Amazing ....

All hail ....

Anonymous said...

Wonderful!

Badri said...

Your blogs are sureshot blockbusters

tris said...

Execllent. Therein lies the story.......

Arun said...

i can't believe this..im too stunned now..this is amazing talent!!

సतीsh said...

And then there are those that only have the password. :(

labdab said...
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Priyamvada_K said...

Crisp and nice...and so heartbreaking.

Priya.

Archana said...

That was simply brilliant !

Anonymous said...

hey, i have read this one in tamil with he in place of she in some magazine.

Sasiprabha said...

Dropping u for the first time. Superb

rt r said...

I have seen the same as a kavidhai on Anandha Vikatan..
Someone has shamelessly lifted your poem without your permission, i guess..