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Thursday, June 30, 2005

A quick tale 41

Ring

“I was just about to call you”, he’d say whenever she rang. Even if he hadn’t called in days. And she’d have been sleeping next to the phone. Just in case.
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17 comments:

  1. ShammiJune 30, 2005 1:22 pm

    That is so sad... can just see it happening.

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  2. AnonymousJune 30, 2005 1:49 pm

    nice post, but did you misplace he and she there....

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  3. Subramaniam AvinashJune 30, 2005 1:54 pm

    cuts both ways. oops, didn't mean to pee in the shwower.

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  4. MiyaJune 30, 2005 1:54 pm

    She used to come up with the most ridiculous reasons just so she could call him..

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  5. AnonymousJune 30, 2005 3:15 pm

    So true.. :)
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    This is nothing new, only the 'he' and 'she' got interchanged after she told the Yes.
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  6. BalakumarJune 30, 2005 3:30 pm

    Pretty deep! The "could be"s sure are frustrating...

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  7. BalajiJune 30, 2005 4:14 pm

    nice... what happens when boy and girl have different intentions about their relationship i guess... short but touching...

    btw i finally succumbed and attempted a QT myself :)

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  8. Subramaniam AvinashJune 30, 2005 4:19 pm

    hey, i'm new around here. do visit my blog...
    http://ubermaniam.blogspot.com/

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  9. Subramaniam AvinashJuly 01, 2005 12:48 am

    i know what u mean about the pervert, jacques. cheers and tnks.

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  10. AnonymousJuly 01, 2005 1:48 am

    Great work as always Ammani...
    Ramya.. that was a lovely comment...sounds so real..

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  11. divyaJuly 01, 2005 2:09 am

    hmmm........don't know what to say..nice blog!!

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  12. kaaju katliJuly 01, 2005 4:34 am

    Ammani, we wrote about the same thing :-) Coincidence or fate?

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  13. AnonymousJuly 01, 2005 5:06 am

    terse and expressive.

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  14. UnknownJuly 01, 2005 8:34 am

    and check often to make sure the phone is still working, cut coversations short with friends just in case he rings at that time and he gets a busy tone :) oh so many ridiculous things!

    And as Ramya said, invent reasons to ring :)

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  15. NSJuly 04, 2005 4:36 am

    very poignant! and something i can identify with:(

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  16. MinalJuly 15, 2005 11:39 am

    Hi,
    Chanced upon your blog. Your quick tales have got me hooked!
    Too good and very true:-)
    Keep them coming.

    See ya

    http://grangergab.blogspot.com

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  17. xxyyzzJuly 15, 2005 2:29 pm

    Hi, I jsut heard of your blogs and started reading.
    This one is sharp !!

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