- I then stopped, thought for a moment and turned back...
Reminds me of the movie 12B
- lifeless like a corpse, feeling no trace of regret for this decision i had made... PS. btw Ammani, your storie are really thought provoking.hey Chenthil it's no 12B now ;-)
shortest flash fiction i've ever read!
"Incisive", they said. "Insightful", people commented in her blog. "Sharp", "Beautiful","Creative"... The comments section in her blog couldn't get enough of the adjectives.And then, came the inevitable. A point where she decided to write in order increase the count of stories. Or rather, for a much more noble cause.A point where she accidentally stopped writing for the joy of writing. And then the comments started turning drab.Her stories were now cliched. Common place.
And hopefully, the story doesnt end there.
and someone said...hey...methinks shes posing as anonymous every now n then...
Link to Anonymous's comment:Or was she reaching out to a lot more people ? ... including commoners, who were getting to know a thing-or-two after reading her stories.
AmmaniI loved your writing...They are mesmerisingly captivating and profusely thought provoking I love them...Do keep writingI hope to find more such stories when i visit every time :)ThanksAparna
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- I then stopped, thought for a moment and turned back...
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the movie 12B
ReplyDelete- lifeless like a corpse, feeling no trace of regret for this decision i had made...
ReplyDeletePS. btw Ammani, your storie are really thought provoking.
hey Chenthil it's no 12B now ;-)
shortest flash fiction i've ever read!
ReplyDelete"Incisive", they said. "Insightful", people commented in her blog. "Sharp", "Beautiful","Creative"...
ReplyDeleteThe comments section in her blog couldn't get enough of the adjectives.
And then, came the inevitable. A point where she decided to write in order increase the count of stories. Or rather, for a much more noble cause.
A point where she accidentally stopped writing for the joy of writing. And then the comments started turning drab.
Her stories were now cliched. Common place.
And hopefully, the story doesnt end there.
ReplyDeleteand someone said...
ReplyDeletehey...methinks shes posing as anonymous every now n then...
Link to Anonymous's comment:
ReplyDeleteOr was she reaching out to a lot more people ? ... including commoners, who were getting to know a thing-or-two after reading her stories.
Ammani
ReplyDeleteI loved your writing...They are mesmerisingly captivating and profusely thought provoking
I love them...Do keep writing
I hope to find more such stories when i visit every time :)
Thanks
Aparna