Wrapping
It sat in front of her, wrapped in shiny, gold paper. With a little red satin bow perched on top. It sat in front of her, like an obedient little girl.
Go on, open it.
She stared at it.
Go on.
She had never been given a gift like this before.
Aren't you curious?
Sometimes her gift would come in a plastic bag.
Oh, c'mon. Open it.
Sometimes it'd just be handed to her. Unwrapped and naked.
Don't you want to know what I got for you?
But often, nothing.
If you don't open it, I will.
She couldn't take her eyes off it.
A hand drew the little box away from her and started to peel the layers of wrapping. She looked away, somehow it didn't feel right to stare.
Stripped of its sheltering, the gift was thrust in front of her.
Like it?
Shiny, ornate, pretty, nude. A jewellery box or something equally unnecessary. She wished the mystery had lasted a little longer.
Love it.
12 comments:
Hey, glad you're over your technical probs! All okay now? How's the oung 'un?
:D Loved this one. Can so relate
yeah more often than not its the idea that intrigues :)
wow. i liked the sensuality of this.
mmm... a lingerie.
ah! loved this!
foreplay's always better than the act, apparently :))
Needless to say, I liked this piece very much :)
its very much like reading ur stories...wished the mystery had lasted a little longer!
'foreplay.'
perfect word. :)
lol..."Awesome" is an understatement.:-)
will wrap it nexttime. Awesome!
Very cool design! Useful information. Go on!
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