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Voicing Silence 7

Monday, January 02, 2006

A quick tale 102

A real story

You see him at a distance. Running to catch the bus that you're sitting in and peering out of. His strides are long and he is holding up his hand to signal to the driver to wait for him. The bus driver hasn't noticed him and gets ready to move out of the bus stop. He checks his rear view mirror and then his side mirror and gently slides into first gear. The noise reminds you of a singer clearing his throat before launching into a song. But this is no time for ornamental similies. You look out at the buscatcher again. He has picked up speed and is hurtling towards the bus. At this rate, you estimate, he should be able to make it. But just about.

The driver is now checking the road to see if he can pull out. A car is blocking his path. This should give the runner precious seconds he so badly needs, you think. C'mon lad, you mentally cheer, you can do it! There's not far to go! The runner puts in all his effort for one final burst. You pray to the Gods, invoking their powers to impel him towards his destination. But the bus has started moving now leaving its wannabe passenger behind. Stop, you want to cry, there's a man who wants to board the bus. Instead you sit glued to the seat with guilt, staring at your feet. The bus has now picked up speed and is well on its course. You lift your head and look out of the window. You see him at the bus stop, bent down, hands resting on knees and panting heavily. He looks up and smiles at you. It wasn't my fault, you try to tell him. It's alright, he seems to say, I didn't want to get on the bus anyway.

10 comments:

Lost in trance... said...

waaaaaaaaaat? ohh mama thawwaz da twist of the year so far :O) hahaha gud one!

radhika said...

that was nice :-) kept me hooked all along!

perspective said...

lol...that's such a lovely story..of such keen observation...
you'd have made a wonderful architect too you know!

Anonymous said...

lovely, its a pleasure to read . missed them during your break.

Suguna Purushothaman said...

"i dindnt want to get into the bus anyway" - ur last line. superb........i am going over and over it

Anonymous said...

Nice one. The follow up should be, girl gettin down at the next stop, walking back to the original one. Just to see the guy.

tilotamma said...

She is *so* back

totti said...

nicely written.i had similar experiencec both trying to catch the bus and while sitting in it.good one

Invisible said...

Instead you sit glued to the seat with guilt, staring at your feet. can relate to this..wonder why we do things that way..maybe she didnt want him to make it anyway

Anonymous said...

terrific i likes the twist